Arranged Marriage vs Love Marriage

Here are the teachers notes on the prewrite/draft: Your mla looks really good. Your citations are formated correctly. Remove the blue and underline from your html. Your topics and reason for comparison are clear. You organized your essay was and used topic sentences that introduced the category for both topics. All your paper really needs is some development. Your body paragraphs, especially your first two are very brief. Think back to the illustration essays. What specific examples can you give for each type of marriage in each paragraph.??